Truth hurts the unknown (Triple haiku)

by David   May 28, 2007


Trickles of water
Effortlessly down the stream
Is my paradise

Nature is calling
Soft whispers of tomorrow
Life is a stand still

Nothing is concealed
No where to hide near me now
Truth hurts the unknown

David

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    See....you are so talented!
    I never want to see you doubting yourself again, not ever!!
    This is so f**king beautiful...
    Please never stop writing, I adore your poems.

    *hugs*
    Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Karissa

    I love those type of poems. That one was pretty deep. And I enjoyed it. You write about various things and I love it.

  • 16 years ago

    by kiara

    Wow i loved this
    its great that your trying new styles :) lol im not that brave
    it was perfectly painted picture

    kiara

    p.s my poem wasnt so much about god it was about a person waiting for the person they loved to either live or die but it was to do with faith aswell :) i couldnt decide where to put it lol

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Superb no flow problems and its outstanding. I will try a Haiku soon. You have inspired me. Thank you 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Bonnie Rose

    I love the way in which these words fall off your tongue, its so relaxing and peaceful. i love the imagery of nature, was a really nice read