I like your choice of words. It wasnt totally boring, but it wasn't the best. Although i did like your story line. A lot of people go through things like this.

And a response to my poem that you commented on.

It may be a little confusing, but that is part of the message. Of having mixed feelings when you like someone but you can't seem to tell them. Then having the issue with them liking someone else because you never spoke up. I dont expect everyone to understand my writing, but atleast you put an effort. Thanks :)

You are a very good writer. Not too boring, i liked it.. keep writing! you're wonderful at it..

It was a very touching message, but it was a little bit boring. Technique seemed to be very good as well, nice rhyming and patterns, though some took a second read to work out. All in all, a very nice work! Congrats!

This poem has alot of stark images in it but nothing to really tie it from one line to another, it seems it just has no flow or core meaning to it alot of good images but with little to tie it all up it just leaves the reader what are you talking about. nice try Plot121

This one is not my favorite but it was good. some stanzas didnt really go together.. but it was good. good word usuage def.
Bree

Ok here we go the poem was unintresting to me despite the great vocabulay, it wasn't cliche
But it was rather how do you put it.. blah, ordinary, not waht I would expect from you at all, Ihave read alot of your poems and really like you work, but this although was good, was not you. I really hope that made sense. Somethings just didn't seem to tie togather, kind of radom really, other than that it was good, I won't vote for I will give you a 4/5, and I don't want to down vote you, you've done the same for me.

I did'nt find this one all that boring..but iu bet this is'nt your best...the flow was a tad off but the vocab was superb..
Good work anyways
i'd give u a 4/5 if i were to vote..but i dnt wanna reduce your rate
xxPoojaxx

Its a great poem but I really don't like the theme sorry :( but anyway its just me. Flow is smooth. I like the tone in the poem good job. The language use is amazing. 5/5

Omg thats so sad. this is very true too. the rhythem is ok...there are a few mistakes but it is still beautiful! 5/5

xo kisses xo

The whole poem just rolls of your tongue.
Flows so well. But this stanza flowed amazingly ;

"Promiscuous names, the first reaction.
Expected from ruining the musketeers,
The family of three so happy and free
Are ruined by disappointing love affairs."

I loved the word usage in it and how in one stanza it told the whole story while the rest backed it up.

Loved the title too, eye catching.

Well done :]

Wow. The imagry in this poem is insane. I get this whole scene of a guilty mother trying to explain to her daughter while sitting at a table somewhere, that's just what I imagine anyway. It is really amazing the feelings you described in this poem. It is a superb poem of betrayal of trust. 5/5 for sure

Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

Woman wants more than she deserves,
Rejection this mother will discover.

the idea of writing was very good . take care 5/5

Wow so beautiful and well penned. The flow is awsome and the meaning in the poem is worth complimenting. Great 5/5 piece

Although this poem doesnt capture the attion very well its words have meaning and thats what matters...... keep it up

Wow, well I really liked it. But other than that I really don't know what else to say. I gave it a 5/5.

Oh, there is are two things. This one was a little hard to read for me. i can't say why because I don't know why but it is. Also it didn't really cetch me attention. Sorry

Wow, this was amazing. I'm not sure I completely got all the hidden meaning but I could tell that there was one and that it was very metaphoric. The flow was good as was the vocabulary used throughout. My interpretation of this was that the mother was in love/lust with her daughters lover. Or maybe has had an affair with him. And she is scared of telling her because of all these different reactions she may get. Or I think she may have had affairs before and her daughter thought she wasn't having them any more. And now she has, not with just anyone, but her daughter's lover. I may be completely wrong there but that's what I thought. 5/5

A very well put and set poem. the story was quite intereasting and I appreciate the thought you put into my comment although it made me a bit confused.
5.5

Oh...this...is perfect!
So much power and emotion packed into this piece, and the depth behind the words are clear for the reader to see.
A powerful opening, with each stanza from thereon getting better and better.