amazeingpoem,
great use of words,
i agree with yik on this it's wonderful.
so much feeling and understanding
i also give you a 5
take care
all my love
lorna
xxx

Hey Jar Jar, Excellent poem as per normal! You are a great poet, friend and all round guy, keep it up binks xxx

Just write another poem will you, you crazy a$$. Please stop complaining old man and what is with your pic on here??

This poem is just too good to critcize

but the grammar grimlins are out to get you
I am too kindhearted and to caring
to loving and too sharing.
My hands are widely shown
with my heart all but known.

Then you put your blood on paper it is natural to seek perfection