She's crying, she's waiting

by unknown   May 31, 2007


That cry
day after day
It's getting loud
I can feel how sad she is
Don't you feel it too?
She's asking for help
People not only take her things without asking,
but also use her things recklessly
People pile up their garbage on her
People contaminate her
What was protecting her, was ripped away
What has she's done?
She's too old to bear it all
She's sick,
she's dying now
No body cares
She's sad
She's watching us,
When we all were savage,
When we all were civilized,
Until we all are savage for the second time
She's waiting,
for anybody who realize that we need to be civilized again
She's waiting...
Ms. Earth waiting...

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  • 16 years ago

    by the come back

    Nice poem...

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    WOW!!! This poem is incredible! Topic is amazing and message is great. Every line is written beautifully. I am impressed! Wording is also excellent. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xXxXhes the everything i cudve asked forXxXx

    Woww. this is a great poem. i give it a 5/5. its strong and has strong emotions put in it too. keep writing the way you do

    ***ayshley***

  • 16 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    It was so interesting to read and so chilling words..but you like ideas?

    She's sick,
    she's dying now

    I thought you used so many she's
    and we can change them to those and it would look perfect because it looks a little mind boggling

    So sick
    Almost dying now

    And it will add the poem a good look
    But other than that I really liked it
    Good job,
    Laura

  • 16 years ago

    by Krazikoko

    This Is so good!! PPL Betta recycle after this. NO LITTERING!!!! I luv it man, seriously your 2 damn good!!

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