This is a beautiful love poem. Your over-generalization of the word fell to felled is really creative. The flow is nice and its a great poem.

Wow. this is good : ) haha keep it up.
<3jess

Very nice poem, it reminds me of when I was still a teenager, likeing someone so much and wondering if they feel the same way. Oh how I wish I can go back to then. BTW thank you for commenting on my poem. 5/5

This is good poem.... Keep it up...:)

Hey this poem has so much emotion it was a great read.... thanks for the comment on my stuff... keep up the good writing...

Crystal...

Really liked that good job like ur stlye of writin xx

Well I like the simplicity of this poem, it clearly shows your emotions, good job. It think the flow was okay, I can see that you really improved since december 2006, well done.

This is lovely well done

This is lovely well done