by Garrett May 31, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
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It drips so slowly, runs down so slightly |
by Yuna
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I really like the way you described every moment. of this poem! It was perfectly organized and every sentence led to something more exciting. by the time the poem ended, I was saying "No! What happens!!!" It was a very good poem and the words you used was just icing on the cake (If you like cake). Keep writing and good job! |