Wuuuu I really enjoyed reading this poem :)
um nothing short of 99/5 :))))

Really deep and good poem overall* <3

OMG!!!!
I really know wut u mean in this one
I lost my best friend too

U r so talented Adel :)

Great poem once again. I love your poems and how u express your feelings really great.

WOW! This is an amazing write. I love the repetition - it kinds gives a new edge to the poem and instills this feeling of loneliness and emptiness. Overall I think it was really good though it seemed to fade from really good to just about good when it reached the last stanza. Something remained amiss there - I don't know - that is how I feel. It didn't flow so well as the rest of the stanzas and almost felt forced to me.
"He didn't give me a hope but I am still waiting" - shouldn't it be:
"He didn't give me hope but I am still waiting"

Wow. it is a beautiful poem and i think you are a person that deserves a great respect because you like helping people, but if you need any help i am ready for you

This is an amazing poem that you wrote so beautifuly! I think that its the best one from the rest of your poems that I've read.
Keep up the great work.
5/5

It really makes u think... and I love how u wrote it down... Great work!!! N Im sure someone wil come ur way..

I am really sorry for your friend,but it seems to me that you really miss him and this is the real friendship I wish to have one day.
Wonderful poem and really deep, i hope you can see him again.

Nice job flowed nicely. :-)

May God fulfil your wish!.

I love how you begin each verse, truly a touching line, a describtion that has so much meaning, you're whole poem has so much meaning excellent poem

Awesome! great work!