The fall of the Vampiric Empire...

by DeathlyAmore   Jun 1, 2007


I remember the bright shine of the full moon.
The years of war has come to one last battle.
The Beasts of the Underground... Soon to die...
By the Dark Knights... rulers of the night sky.

I wake up by the call and screech of my brothers.
We are at the end, the fall of our empire is remembered.
Living secret under the shadows we shall revive.
To take over and reclaim our empire and thrive.

We have been put down, tortured, destroyed.
We have been put near the point, of extinction.
We had to hide in the darkness of caves to survive.
At last. We doubled our numbers, our time... arrives.

We take the night sky and block the full moon.
The howling of the billions means they come soon...
As we transform to supernatural winged knight.
The beasts transform with a roar of the moons light.

The start of a new era! We shall RISE above!
With our sharp fangs we bite, kill, massacre...
Years pass... we have been slaughtered...
I return to my cave alone... the last survivor...

We were out-numbered, brothers, gone.
Hope... lost.
In the cave... alone I shall remain...
But beware... The empire... shall rise again...
To at last rule once more in our majestic dark reign!

I remember the bright shine of the full moon...
The years of war has come to one last battle... lost...
The Beasts of the Underground... soon to die...
By the Dark Knights... rulers...
Of the night sky...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Skulblaka Sverda

    GREAT JOB! Fantastic!

  • 16 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Ah, this poem was amazing. my friend read it the same time i did and he really like it also. great job love :x 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Taylor

    You make them sound very vengeful and vile.. sort of a different perspective of what people usually think. I like how you called them brothers when usually they are thought of as solitary, and how you started the war with the hopeful-passionate-victorious thing but in the end they still lost..

    and yet, the mood never changed. Whether or not you intended this.. it's cool, but it would've been better if there was a mood change in the middle to emphasize more clearly.

    You said that you liked to be critiqued lol. I've actually got one (or two) vampiric poems that are just full of mistakes.. (if you wanna check them out..)

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Really good poem, excellently written. You created powerful imagery. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by DeathlyAmore

    Thank you. ALOT.

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