Nice format. It was short and sweet. I especially like the last verse cause even though things evaporate like morning dew, you still think of them and that's love.
cheers, josh

This was a greatly written poem with a deep emotion at the end. i liked your style and rhyme use. at the end you finished it so greatly with (just like the morning dew) that was just so cute.
keep up the great work dear.
a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it.

I really liked this poem, it was short and sweet but very well written at the same time. I liked the last stanza because love isn't always just smiles and happiness, there will always be hard times but it will open your eyes up to the good stuff you weren't paying attention to. Excellent job with this piece 5/5

This was an incredibly sweet poem. I like the imagery you created. It wasn't a bad image, it was sweet, clear, almost refreshing.

The only part I didn't like was that you used the word "shit" - it kind of seemed to take away from the peacefulness of the poem. If you used a word such as "pain", the same story would be told, yet it wouldn't disrupt the style of the poem as much.

Thnx for the comment :) i love your poems! they're soo good ur really talented! 5/5

Hey Secluded Serendipity - Thanks for the comment. I changed shit to pain in the poem - not because I didn't think it suited the poem (as I was trying to portray that I was still angry and hurt, but that love and forgiveness won over in the end). But I also dont want to offend people either. :)

Thanks for the honesty

This poem was short yet so effective. A simple yet strong poem which was packed with great emotions which you portrayed sweetly yet beautifully sad. Well done on this poem I loved it alot. ~mel

Wow... i love short poems that can hold such meaning and power... so sad... yet so true=)

well done

Love
Jacs
xxxx

I liked it. The flow was ok. The word choice was all right. I gave this poem a 5/5.

That last line...so pretty and touching at the same time.
I liked the format you used in this, I think you pulled of the rhyme scheme well.
The only suggestion I would have for this is to try and eliminate some of the fillers (I, and etc) to make the flaw absolutely flawless.

Sweet and shot.
I really liked reading it.

I thought this poem was like a beautiful short love story ,excellent imagery, I could picture the melancholy.very well done.

It was simple but beautiful.. Just like real love.. The ending was good :) it sums up all the emotions. Another fine written piece from you :)

5/5!