Broken soul

by 1Mistake   Jun 1, 2007


Her soul is apathetic, numb, unfeeling..
she sits in a dark corner away from the world,wishing to not be part of it...
She waits for her turn to die...
Her soul was broken,
and now she can't pick up the pieces and make it whole again...
She needs strength to carry on but she can't seem to find it..
So, she sits alone.... waiting...for something to come along and help her...

-Katie Hayes

(( stupid but... oh...well...))

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    You could use some metaphors to make deeper atmosphere and describe your feelings on a better way and lines should be similar size, I think you have a 15 words in one and just 4 words in the next line and that really leaves bad impression. Other, this poem is written nicely, I like the idea of whole piece.
    Keep up.

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