I think that is a song isnt it?
oh well i like it though, reminds me of an oasis

I love the way you compared this person to an oasis as a refuge to oneself.

Take care now.

Nice metaphor! especially the harsh walk in the desert, and then finding the oasis and all that it brings!

I really like this

An interesting read, I like the use of words, the flow is a little disrupted at times, but all in all a very good read, I'm liking your work, keep it up

Wow. i really liked this one too. It has powerful emotion and good flow. I like the metaphores.
xx
Taegan Emily