Getting Up For The Let Down (hostile version)

by Kalgalath   Jun 2, 2007


Here we are,
Fuking around again
It never gets that far,
Before it comes to an end

I am the one who always descends,
Going to the fuking bottom
While I watch you ascend,
Never reaching your autumn

We do this,
We do fuking that
We have a kiss,
We have a nice little chat

That's about it,
Not much at all
You'd think we would quit,
As if we hit a brick wall

But oh no!
We fuk around some more
It appears as though,
We're becoming a chore

The same go*-damed thing,
All the fuking time
I'd almost call it a fling,
With never lasting pantomime

But it never gets that staid,
To call it that word above
Nor is it arrayed,
To be called love

I'm always getting up for the let down,
That is for certain to fuking happen
If you can't understand this noun,
This always strange misshapen

(the opposite poem i wrote of this is Getting Up For The Let Down (amiable version))

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  • 16 years ago

    by Gizmo

    I'd almost call it a fling,
    With never lasting pantomime

    like that pharse.
    not sure about the swearing so much.
    but i'll check out the other one

  • 16 years ago

    by ctmskm

    Not bad with the transition of the two poems I enjoyed the amiable version somewhat more, mainly to the fact that the use of the F bomb in this poem seems to be used to often. You must know the key to a hostel environment is not the way you use profanity but the way you manipulate and distort your words into a form of antagonism.

    -ctmskh

  • 16 years ago

    by Marie

    Pretty good.. anger and hurt fill it but work on the rhythm in the second to last stanza