Tsh awsome poem i mean it 5/5. very nice

Wow this is great poem i hope i don't feel like that after me and my hubby break up.....this poem is making me think......
gosh i love your poems
5/5

Hey i really lik ur poem it wuz cool

It's a good poem but some of the sentances the English isn't quite right.

"i always tell to myself"

should be

"i always tell myself

and

"i just can't deny hurt to my heart"

should be

"i just can't deny how much my heart hurts"

or

"i just can't deny my heart is hurting"

or something along those lines

hope it helped

good job though

xoxo

Excellent poem u have written i really liked it a lot, 5/5 :-)

NICE ONE

EXSALENTE!!!

VERY NICE KEEP IT UP!!!

Great poem!!!! i love it 5\5

Well it was a good poem.. I have some suggestions though..

First. Try to eliminate some of the I's.. Coz using many I's messes up the flow =)

Second. canâ?? < just edit this..

Third. Capitalize the I in the title =)

Nonetheless a good read =)

I can see alot of grammar errors, and I'm expecting you to fix it. Nonetheless, I thought it was great and a written piece.