Forever Stop

by Becca   Jun 2, 2007


Have you ever taken a walk
In that time of day
Where your shadow
Walks directly in front of you?

As I was strolling along
I noticed
How if you look down
At your shadow
The ground is moving through it

It reminded me
That the world is forever changing within and around us,
Even if we don't know
And occasionally you stop, but it always keeps changing

Changing and stopping
Changing and stopping
Forever changing
And then comes the point
Where there are no more shadows
And you have come to the end

And it reminded me
That sometimes
We forever stop

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  • 16 years ago

    by Chris

    I love the overall concept of it. the ending was remarkable and i like that you actually stuck with the shadow idea throughout the entire poem. some people start a concept and don't complete it. good job! but, i think those 2 lines that are extremely long throw off the flow since all the others are a lot shorter. but it's no big. overall, great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Refinnej Sin

    .......
    .............
    ..honestly......and simply.....wow
    i love this with the burning passion of a thousand suns! i mean wow! i'm going to tell my friends! like.....wow lol