Forever Waiting

by Anaisthitos   Jun 3, 2007


Every day I'm waiting
For a tap on my door
Every night I hope and pray
That in my dreams, you'll soar

Every time my phone rings
I cross my fingers with belief
That maybe you'll be on the line
Until my tense must cease

You've never came to find me
I cannot say that I blame you
Yet how come, I have this feeling
You'll come back to me, fine and new

So every time I see a man
With curtains of black hair
I plead that it's the man I love
But fate doesn't care

I should have let this go by now
A normal person would
But how can I give up on you
I wouldn't even if I could

~~This poem is dedicated to someone real. Someone out there right now. Someone I love and I'll always be waiting for.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    A sad and emotional read about grief at the loss of osmeone important to you. Your rhyme scheme was good but some of them seemed a little cliche. Your vocabulary was quite simple, and easily understandable. The rfirst two stanza's have a good flow but it gets a little sketchy at the third. i think this could of worked in the love poem section as well. Your emotion and how you feel about this person is displayed really well in this read. Sturture of the poem was ok. To improve it work on the rhymes you use and use a varied punctuation. But a good read non the less. Keep wriitng! xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Very good poem well done for this work you should be proud of it xxxxxxx

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