My Shooting Star

by Lesney Jenn Sevilla   Jun 4, 2007


Every time I go out at night
I look up at the sky above
Waiting for a shooting star to come out
Hoping for my shooting star to give me a shot

Shooting star where are you
Shooting star could you make my dream come true
Please don't make me cry
Please don't leave me behind
Please don't make me blue
Please make my wish come true

I believe that wishes do come true
Like Cinderella and snowhite do
I believe in happy ending
And that's what I'm dreaming

So I'll wait for you my shooting star
To make my dream come true.

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  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Hello, this is a good piece and we all would like to wish upon a shooting star for all our dreams to come true but it's not so easy and life throws what it will at us.

    Great piece, Em

  • 7 years ago

    by Lesney Jenn Sevilla

    Thank you so much Ben!
    I felt so old been a member since 2007 hehehehe.

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A lovely poem and a lovely end. I see this has been here for a while without a comment or rating, so I have righted that wrong at least!

    Take care,

    Ben

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