Very well done.. um 2 things i could see that didnt quit blend "L for lame" is that ment to be lame? or the animal lamb, lamb ryms with jam also and the end it says " when mum & me" i think it would flow better if it was with mum & me...
sorry to be picky.. but apart from that well done keep up the good work 4/5

Lol....Mohamed..it's..awww it's so cute..there is so much of "so-child like"something in the poem..and i loved the rhyme scheme too...Great job!
Keep writing!
5/5=)
xxPoojaxx

This is a great poem, pretty funny as well. The word Lamb has a b in it not an e, and I think you meant peck instead of pack. Either way excellent job 5/5

Thts really nice reminds me my kinder garden...

God bless u

Haha. Its ccute! And the rhymes don't sound forced. It brings me back...you should write a children's book!

Cute poem. I'm sure alot of little kids would like it. It had a nice flow and was a simple and easy read. I gave it a 5/5.

LMA0!!!!
S00 KY00T3 DA P03M!!!
i L0V3 iT!!
iTZ FUNNY TA!!
HAHAHA 5/5
K33P iT UP!
~TiiA~

I love your poem and how it rhymes and all that! It's very nice....

This poem cool for kids lol. I like. 5/5
-vino

Really cute for kids. Simple and sweet. Kids wil love reading it. 5/5

Ha ha ha ....lol,wat does lol mean, i use it but i don't know wat it means!!!

Aww that was soo cute..childish and funny together. really sweet! and educational of course! great work..keep it up! nuf luv xx

Too cute. ^^ (5/5)

Omg that poem is great for children

I don't find it particularly funny, whereas I believe that children poems like this one shouldn't be overlooked as if it's of no importance. In fact, this piece was charming and cute. Appealing to say the least.

Nicely penned, as always, m'dear. =]
all the best and take care,
Debbie

Nice =)!

A poem with such a child like essence is refreshing to see. this was cute and a little diffrent. Diffrent in my opion is good. The flow was good, some of the rhymes seemed a little off in some places, other than that the word chose was excellent. nicely done 5/5

This was a very cute poem I enjoyed it from A too Z a delightful read for anyone. Well done wording and a joy to lern great job Plot121

Hey good job!!!!
~danielle~

It was so cute, i loved it, it is the perfect way to learn the ABC's. nicely done. maybe i could teach my son the same way when he is older. lol. 5/5 my favorite was the letter X, what an easy way to remember it.