Lol...funny...i mean cute...yeah kind of ..
Well written short and yeah i had fun reading this one...
5/5
xxPoojaxx

I thought that it was very cute. I liked it. I gave it a 5/5.

Amazing poetry so nice to read and the rhythm is so beautiful. I just love it 5/5

I liked that, good reyming there i give it a 5/5

This endears me exceedingly. It reminds me of the children rhymes and songs which I used to sing aloud. In any case, I have no critique whatsoever; 'twas simply brilliant. Nice work, nonetheless. I actually enjoyed reading and rereading it. Or, should I say, singing? =]
all the best and take care,
Marian

It was so interesting and so funny
But i guess it is do you have instead of have you
Keep it up,
Laura

Lol awww this ones cute.. you should make a longer one so we can see what your made of... its precious :)
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This is a quite humorous parody5>>>>>

XD AHAHAHAHA! My brothers didn't find it funny! But I did, well I didn't get it but I still laughed because it was so random! Random stuff makes me laugh! 5/5

Thats a cool poem! short but funny and cute! i really liked it. if you keep writitng you could beacome a very good writer!!! this is a 5/5 nice job!

Okay...I didn't think it was funny and you stole if from baa baa black sheep but you just changed the words...I don't know..Really didn't like it...Sorry....

3/5

Mmmmm.... it wasn't all that funny or cute. It sounded more like you just wanted to put something up on this website because you registered for it. It was simple, unorginal, and required to thought to write in my opinion.

Ok, so this isnt the best poem that i have read, however for your first attempt of writting on P&Q it was not bad. It had some cute moments, which is good.
'Funny' poems i find are always the hardest to write...So i can not really critique other than say it wasnt really to my taste. Good write though.
xx

Aww, it was very cute. It's like a nursery rhyme, isn't it? It reminded me of my childhood, when I was about 6.

It won't say it was a work of art or anything, but it was very sweet and a fun read for me.

This was really cute lol 4/5, brought bak memories of being in a daycare center lol, i must admit, i was expecting something a lot longer and in depth b/c thats all i have been readin all day lol thanx 4 the flashbacks tho lol

Its cute and all...and i know the "wool" line works with bah bah black sheep...but "full" doesnt really fit the one you're trying to work here, but other than that it was excellent, good job!

It was pretty good. It was short and in a sense
sort of funny

the ending was good, but maybe it could have rhymed. BUt the flow was nice

great job, 5/5

You know what this reminds me of?
Those little hand games that everyone used to play when they were little.
Very cute :)

This poem wasnt the greatest, but not bad for your first poem. Ba-Ba-Black Sheep, wasn't it?
I dont really understand this line:

And one for the one who gives me a kiss

Have fun and keep writing!
--Trinity

Aww that was a really cute poem. I like how you put a new twist on the old nursury rhyme.