A Dream World

by XxTearDropxX   Jun 5, 2007


Listen to me when I say my love for you
Over flows even the oceans that are
Vast. And when it comes down to it, over
Everyone else, I would pick u. When I think of you, I think of

Hearts and things that are
Unsuspected. But to tell you the truth,it
Really hurts to know that you still love her. So I close my eyes
Tight and wish upon a
Star that one day, when I mention her you will say

Who is that and
How can you remember someone who
Even he forgot about.
Never the less,

It still hurts, it makes me wish there was no such thing as

Love. That you could be in love with
Only one person, and you would be
Very happy with them. And
Even if you end up fighting,

You could figure it out and the whole problem would be
Over with. But the best part is, you would never be
Unfaithful to who you are with.

Now read it down.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie smiles

    This is so good! Your writing is so deep-i really like how u you used nature in your work-like the ocean and stars. It shows that you're thinking like a poet on more than one level. AMAZING!!

  • 16 years ago

    by mike magyar

    Very nice im sorry u have to feel this way but great poetry and powerful emotion