Comments : My Fair Lady

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Wow. that took an intersting turn. this was not at all what i pictured this poem from the title. good job. you captured a different topic. i like the wording in your poems, though there are a few areas where words stubble or gap. good job. 4/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by LockedInEternity

    Amazingly written...i didnt realize till you said the word "sell" that she was a made her sound asoundinly beautiful and proved a point that shes still the same person and that she doesnt do it cause she likes it but cause she has no other choice since its too late..i thought it was very good...5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Robert

    This was a good poem up to a point the last section was abit rough to say the most part I liked it but the flow was off it seems you didn't go from saintly woeman to harlet so well I think with a bit of revision you may find a more smooth transition Plot121

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammie

    Wow, this is quite an interesting poem. I wasn't expecting the twist at the end at all. Your description created beautiful imagery, and the flow was really good. It did get a bit rough at the end, but it was only minor. Well done at this unique piece.


  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    It's funny how we sometimes look at people and assume we know a little if not most about them judging by the way they look/dress. I loved the poem and the topic was very unique, flow was pretty good and it ended strong - nicely done 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Sit and stare= sits and stares

    Interesting poem. I read it all, and liked it. I think you could have ended it differently, and you could have gone more in depth, but other than that this poem was wonderous.

    Well deserved 5/5 from me =]

    Well done.

    ~Stephen White

  • 17 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    Some of the grammar ws off, but I like how you started by describing her and then going into her "job", and you could tell what it is even though you didn't come right out and say it. Great job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jacqui Armstrong

    Good poem... tells a good story


    She could make every average man drool.
    For it is this beautiful woman's duty.

    i didnt think this made much sence... and the first line there seemed kinda childish...