Very well written poem expressing your feelings and how sorry are you for your grandpa. Well done 5/5

Wow i love it especially cause ive gone to my brothers funeral and didnt cry, but it was different situation i guess. sorry for the loss

5/5

Dont be sorry people deal with things in different ways its not about the emotion you show others and what is shown on the outside its more the memories you have and the feelings within...really good writing keep it up :)

Awwww... beautiful poem.. so heart felt..
i feel the same way for someone... i just wanted to believe she just was sick, but she was dying, and i still dont believe it true..
awesome poem..
<ang

There's a word missing here lol, "But I guess did", but that is all I see wrong with this poem. Another heartfelt and beautifully written poem. 5/5

marcella

Well this is a great poem.. You even dedicated it to your grandpa.. It's really hard to lose someone in our life..

Anyway once again it was a great poem, this is my favorite out of the three =)

Keep up the good work!

Another great poem by a great poet, again with this great poem you have shown your great talent.

keep it up
a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it