by Chris Jun 6, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
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Paint a perfect smile |
by KIMMY
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THIS IS A GREAT POEM!!!! I COULD FEEL THE PAIN AND THE EMOTION!!! |
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Omg! this is amazing. i love it, the emotions i felt were so awsume. the wording and everything. |
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Yeah that is gorgeous i love how it rythmed and how it was so powerful in the way that you wrote it. The feeling reminded me of how i feel, how i have felt, sad - but gorgeous |
by Angela
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Its a really good poem you have lots of talent!!!! |
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This poems is really great i really liked it it made perfect sense |