by gena Jun 6, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
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Death was a beautiful creature on a mission |
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Great poem ,good flow ,but need to capitalize the beginning of the stanza's give it a better look and makes the reader more interested in what you have to say m great job, your friend Tracy dean 5/5 |
by dawn green
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Very nice write! keep up the good work |