Landing

by RetroRavey   Jun 7, 2007


You hear the wheels
Crash
Beneath you.
Passengers all ready bags,
But you just sit there...
"Will this pass quickly?"
You ask yourself...
The plane rolls
Losing speed.
Why won't it go faster?
The faster you get off,
The faster you can get back on

Seven weeks from now.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Vanessa

    This really grabbed and held my attention, I am afraid the meaning was lost on me though, other than that the flow fit well, the word choice was great, and the picture you paonted was clear. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittany C

    It was different. I'm not sure I completely understood what it ment. But it did have a nice flow and word choice. I gave it a 5/5.

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