Promises Unbroken (Prayers Unheard)

by RetroRavey   Jun 7, 2007


Swimming in a sea
of silent screams.
Wishing for promises
unbroken,
wishing for the blood.
Silent secrets scratching,
praying to be let loose
but can't be revealed
but to you...
And you're not here!
Wishing you were
and promises were left
UNBROKEN!
Where are you
when I need you most?
Swimming, drowning
in broken promises
and prayers unheard.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Cool poem. It was different. It had a nice flow and wonderful word choice. I gave it a 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by 1Mistake

    O0o0o!! strong words there!! I understand!! ish sorry... and good writing...!!

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