Great job.... I like it and i like the nice words you used! Never stop writing...

Your words of love and affection are brilliant. your knowing of what love is is amazing. well done. plz keep writing.

5/5 David

That was a really moovin poem. pain of lose really helps create poems... keep up the good work

I'm thinking of my one true love,
the one i can never have.

you all poem was very good. but these lines touched my heart. i realy appriciate to your work.
well done and good luck for next time.

i will give you 5/5

Well done you express everything so well it is just like being there also.

Inspirational writing :)

5/5 on everything i have read today amazing stuff bree