No One Should

by claire   Jun 7, 2007


No one should have to wipe their own tears.
No one should be
Alone all their years.
No one should live
And never know love.
Life is worth
Nothing
If you choose all of the above.

~~~~~Inspired by a poem by Mauro Garcia ~~~~~

**does the last part make sense? also, is the title unbearably lame? I'm a little unsure about this poem, so please be honest!

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  • 16 years ago

    by HiddenPoet

    Good Job, the whole poem makes sense and displays a sense of care for those who are sorta suffering through life.

  • 16 years ago

    by Mauro Garcia

    That was a great poem, and im glad my poetry inspired you, Keep it up your an awesome poet

  • 16 years ago

    by Mauro Garcia

    That was a great poem, and im glad my poetry inspired you, Keep it up your an awesome poet

  • 17 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    I think the last part makes perfect sense and i like the title.. everything you wrote in this poem def does make sense and i agree with all of it.. life is always better when you have someone to share it with.. nice job =]