Love

by Mousie   Jun 8, 2007


What is the word?
It explains our heart's feelings;
Beckons to us
When we least expect it;
Releases emotions
Cooped up inside for ages;
Frames our every thought
With fantasies and dreams.
What is the word?
It is sometimes blind
Hidden away for years;
Makes us wallow
On someone else's every word;
Strips us of our thoughts
Of hatred and evil;
Shows us not only the light
But the relief the dark can bring;
Releases the passion
So longed for in our lives;
Aspire to be
The best we can be;
Become one
With a soulmate.
What is the word?
Oh, that's right;
Love.

result of boredom after finals. i think it's pretty good myself, let me know what you think.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Polaroid

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    if that explains it,,,,
    lol
    polaroid

  • 16 years ago

    by Fan Angeleo

    Written very well, so much emotions, just keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by TwiztidJuggalette

    I really liked this poem...It was easy for me to understand...

    The wording was very nicely written...

    Overall 5/5...

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    It was an enjoyable read. Well done, flow was flawless throughtout the poem. Keep up the good work :)

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Bryan

    Well i think this is pretty good mousie, it flows together well and i like the choice in wording, i give this one a perfect 5/5!!! keep them coming!!!

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