I really liked it. I know how that feels. I thought that this was a good poem. I would never have guessed that it was your first love poem:) The flow was great and I loved the word choice and the format of this poem. I gave it a 5/5.

Nice poem. So sweet and beautiful. Well written seemed a little rough at times but still so much emotion and so well expressed it was just a great read. Awesome work keep it up. I agree this deserves a 5/5

This was a rather delightful read, despite the seeming need for the tightening-up of some lines. I liked the substance, specially its refrain--it was beautiful. I further find the sentiments of this poem genuine and sweet. Nicely penned, nonetheless. =]

Marian

For your first love poem this was great I never would of guessed. Some lines needed a little tighting up nothing to reuin the entire poem though. This was an nice read and was really sweet. Well done on a cute love poem which you have written. Keep up the good work~mel

I loved your poem I gave a 5/5... I can see where your coming from cause I've felt that way and still am feeling that way... Keep up the good work...

Liz

Nawww again a lovely poem.. vry sweet n romantic.. so touching 5/5!
keep it up i reali love ur work
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I loved it! Very beautiful! 5/5

This is a great poem

Wow dude, this is outstanding. Look at the meaning and the flow, its awesome. The feelings are just spontaneously overflowing along with the poem. The repitition also had a clear function and throughout the poem the rhythm and the grip was maintained. 5/5 all the way

Tc
Fsams

Wow....
That was Awesum!!Lol
Loved it!! =]]

How sweet. What a lovely poem of love. Excuse the pun. It was a heart warming poem. The repeated stanzas top it off.

Alesia <3