My own heart affected

by Bonnie Rose   Jun 8, 2007


In your fairness, your unchanging smile,
though i know not, what it may be for,
it is fastened to my own heart affected,
with such an ache, though a beautiful one.

it is fair to assume yet,
that smile belongs to a doubtful thing
and is mine, no more.

perhaps it is the saddest smile
my heart and my eyes have ever seen.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mandy Grace

    Very good poem.... i liked how it was simple and yet so affective! it was wonderfull.

    mandy :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Rose Noble

    Is poem was interesting. You grasped your concept and it had a great rhythm. It's great, I'm just into rhyming poetry a bit more. 5/5, though. <3
    Rose

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    This was rather delightful to read. You grasped your diction in this piece quite well. I also loved the ambiance of seeming prehistoric times applied on this piece. It was simply lovely. Thank you for sharing!

    Marian

  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    WOW that was awesome , great poem , love it , short and straight to point, you have a lovely way of using your words and expressing your feelings , great job sweetie, keep it up. your friend Tracy 5/5

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