Here it is

by XcrissyX   Jun 8, 2007


Here it is
the place where we live
people seem to take
but never seem to give
are lives are a mess
but no one seems to tell
keep tryna handle the stress
might as well be in hell
there ant no peace around
people too busy tryna stand there ground
moneys there main priority
never thinking about the society
always thinking about what we want
instead of what we need
so many people dyeing
other people just thinking about the goal they wona succeed
never thinking about the suffering
just putting are heads down and moving on
pretending nothings wrong
maybe we are too scared to open are eyes
tryna block out the cries
but there still there
and we know it
we are just too afraid to show it.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nunny

    Every single word is true!
    And the way you expressed the whole thing is excellent.
    I really like it! keep up the great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by adroit

    True and powerfully so. You have given reality a face. Honest luck!

  • 16 years ago

    by On Cupids Bad Side

    Wow that was really good. it has a good rhythm to it and it's also so true. good job :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Birgit

    This is good as well =)! Keep it uppp!

  • 16 years ago

    by Bob

    You are very good at capturing a mood