The image of the girl she just saw

by XcrissyX   Jun 8, 2007


She sits in a room
locks the door
shes in tears
lying on the floor
theres a knock on the door
she doesn't reply
covering her cry with a quiet sigh
she looks in the mirror
the tears come back more
she hates the image
of the girl she just saw
punches the reflection
and screeches in pain
wondering how shes gonna stay sane
she looks at the blood dripping from her fist
her eyes lead down to the cuts on her wrist
she silently falls to the ground
trying her best not to make a sound
the words they said wont go away
forever these words will linger and stay
thinking of the girl everyone seems too like
so she keeps in mind what she is supposed to look like
if only people liked her as much as they did she
then maybe there would be hope
that there could be a you and me

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nunny

    This is just.. FANTASTIC! .. i really loved it! keep up the great writing.
    Awsome!

  • 16 years ago

    by broken angel

    You know what, this is actually a very good poem, the last four lines were a little teensy weensy confusing but over all two thumbs up!

  • 16 years ago

    by xo kisses xo

    Awwww thats so sad but its really good. i like it. deff 5/5!

    xo kisses xo

  • 16 years ago

    by Ivan Miller

    At one point I really did'nt like myself either, I just wish that the person that made me feel better was here, she knew how greatful I was for her.

  • 16 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Then ending was slightly confusing, just the last line, but the whole poem was well done and sad.
    "covering her cry with a quiet sigh" that was a good line. well described!
    Charisma*

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