It felt like I was stabbed to death [Quatrain]

by Mary Rose   Jun 9, 2007


It felt like I was stabbed to death
[Quatrain - my 1st attempt]

It felt like I was stabbed to death
My heart wounded, shattered like glass
All the things that were said to me
Oh how I wish I never heard

The pain is so unbearable
It felt like I was stabbed to death
Oh how I wish it was a dream
That this heartache is not for real

The bleeding wound wont stop, I weep
Your words strikes my heart, way too deep
It felt like I was stabbed to death
My heart is wounded, will it mend?

Countless tears Ive cried every day
Cos of my injured heart that bleeds
Profusely, never seems to end
It felt like I was stabbed to death.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Reminders Torture

    This poem was heartaching.
    i felt it so deep

    The pain is so unbearable
    It felt like I was stabbed to death
    Oh how I wish it was a dream
    That this heartache is not for real

    The bleeding wound wont stop, I weep
    Your words strikes my heart, way too deep
    It felt like I was stabbed to death
    My heart is wounded, will it mend?

    best stanza of all.
    hope you right more good poems as that.
    5/5
    superb work

    best wishes