The Haiku on a Demon

I have edited the poem,changing the "I" to "Is".

You are great!

Wow!

Wow, that's a really good poem! Just agreeing to what previous commenters wrote about the "I" turning to "Is" in the second line. Other than that, I like the idea you used about when dreaming. Keep it up, and 5/5

With all due respect,
Hatori
The Illusionist

I agree with the reviewers above me about the 'is' part. Other than that, it was a nicely penned Haiku. I take it as a person outwitting the Demon in a nightmare. :D My take anyway... All the best and take care! ~Debbie