Lost soul

Very deep poem. the tone is very distinct and memorable

Very good poem i liked it very much keep checkin mine out n i will surely return the favor

Firstly thank you so much for the comment you made on mine.This was very good ,as I read it I can feel so much emotion ,well done and keep writing.

Deep and attractive for its dark nature. I loved the language you used, as it worked with the dialect; the dialect sounded Louisianian.

I would only recommend a spell check.

The midnite stars hold such pain
and all my sorrow
they withhold a key to hell

Wow this was a really dark and deep poem.
Very breathtaking and moving.
Loved that stanza it was absolutely amazing
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Take Care.