The sadness in this poem is apparent. Im so sorry for your loss.
this poem is beautiful.
the only thing id say is that the layout is slightly odd, i mean its very unique and you could argue that it fits well with the subject your talking about, but i think it may flow better if you broke up the lines.
But i really liked reading this its beautiful and the imagery of the flower was brilliant, i thought it was very good.
Geo

This is a really good poem... im sorry about your grandpa. my grandma died around a month ago so if you ever need any help dealing with it im here...
try putting spaces between the lines so its easier to read next time
<3 jess

I liked it but i think that it would have been better if it was longer. I gave it a 5/5.

I really liked this poem...I'm sorry about your grandpa...I know what its like to loose somebody... Anway...Good writing...The flow was really good I give it a 5/5

It has a nice flow to it but could have been longer. it is to bad ur grandpa died though

Your descriptions and metaphores of Midnight flower with your grandpa is really nice. I would advise you to write them in line by line but not like a para. Its really nice 5/5

This poem was amazing!!!
the flow of it was excellent!
great job!!!!
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--Jess

Wow that was really really deep and really really good. im sorry about your grandpa. keep it up!

Heyy im soo sorry about ur grandpa i never met one of my grandpa's so yeah ilove to poems its aweome
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Nice work i love it

Awesome poem! i love it!!!!

Awsome Poem, Beautifuly well writen and connected to other things then just your grandpa, i loved it, 5/5.
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