A Bubble Of Anger

by claire   Jun 10, 2007


A bubble of anger
Found its way into my chest
Growing, growing quickly
A raw and painful abcess

I don't think I can control it
But still, I sit and try
It needs to be let out soon
Whether in a scream or cry
Cause if its not let out soon
I think that I'll just die.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Timothy B

    Straight and to the point... just the way everything should be. good writing

  • 16 years ago

    by Adelle

    This is a good poem with a good lay out it may be better if it was a little longer because it needs more description.

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    Hmm. I'm not sure about this poem. it's a good poem, but at the same time.. not very descriptive.
    Overall it's an okay poem.
    4/5?

    Maybe some punctuation would help?

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