Dreams and reality

by Yourmyangel   Jun 10, 2007


I want to be happy
i want the notebook love
i want the perfect boyfriend everyone talks about
i wanna kiss in the rain and see fireworks
i wanna lay and watch the stars in his arms..
but then reality hits me......
i am happy
i do have to the notebook love
i do have the boyfriend that everyone talks about
someday i will see fireworks while kissing you in the rain
someday i will lay on ground in your arms watching the stars.
so reality does win over dreams..you just gotta wake up and realize it..

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  • 18 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    Hey,
    nice poem, its sweet, I have only one little thing to say that I don't like, you use the word ''wanna'', but that's speaking language, I hope you understand what I mean. I think its better if you used ''want to'' instead of ''wanna''. well that's just me, I think the flow is okay and its easy to read so definitely a 5/5 from me,
    kisses stephanie

  • 18 years ago

    by Georgi

    I like this!
    I love the realisation half way through its awesome...well done =]
    take care
    love geo
    ps. if u have time, please comment my latest? thanks babe =] keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by supratim

    REALLY A SWEET POEM. I M STUNNED Y IT IS NOT RATED BY ANY ONE??
    5/5

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