This is really good.
keep writing.your good at it. : )
<3jess

Very beautiful poem.

Like the flow of the poem,the rhyming too

I liked this piece a lot up until the last stanza..it throws off the flow a bit. So I would try rewording it. But other than that it's very sweet. I was surprised you asked me to comment your stuff...thank you.
Charisma*

Awwwwwwwwwwwww thats such a cute poem!
short but sweet
i liked it ^_^
nice work =D

Keep Smiling x

Adorable poem. I could totally understand what you were saying. I could tell it was written from the heart and it made me smile. I adore this poem. By the way, your name is rockin! lol 5/5

I love this poem it's one of the best you have written
5/5
=]
x

Aw. This was really sweet , yet sad. The flow was a bit off because of the way that you have the format of it. but other than that.. i thought it was good.

<3

Awww. this poem is soo sweet. i love it. 5/5

That is really nice really liked it nice! 5/5

This would have to be one of my favorites cause its like you were head over heals and that is just so cute!

Awww thats so cute. i have allllot of love poems i think ud enjoy

this was adorable and a great write 5/5

Awww this is soooooooo cute!!!!!!!!! 500/500

Why are there so many people all saying that you did a great job with this and it was beautiful ? Don't get me wrong, I like that you expressed emotion , but it was cliche & cheesy to me . Like it seemed like some of the rhymes were forced . Deary, as much as I love (talking to) you, you need to work at it T-T But you're not that bad . With that ending, it was different [: Which I liked .

..__MiNDYY

Wow... this was really REALLY good.

You put so much emotion in it with a bit of your usual dark self in the end. Great job, keep up the good work!!!!!!