This is another great poem andrew, flows great so i give it a perfect 5/5!!! keep them coming!!!

Good poem. I like what you've done with the first stanza.

This poem was so sad yet deep.
love the way you have written it.

I ponder thoughts of only you
to end up
screaming and
howling too.

I wish you'd go away
but i know its too good to
be true and ill always
love you.

I know I wont escape
you'll leave me to die
and so I
cry.

great stanza.
the imagery was perfect and the flow was good.
5/5
keep up the good work.

best wishes

It was good, i have read some of your other poems and could tell your not accustomed to writing with this emotion. but it was good.
i gave it a 5/5
thanks for the comment on my dear nobody poems by the way.

Wonderfully written poem dude, excellent write, good flow , all in all you did a great job very sad watching and waiting for love to die, your friend Tracy dean 5/5

Thatwas such a sad poem... it made a tear from my eyes. nicely panned aswell
5/5

Yet another awesome poem mate :)
although it was sad :s
5/5

To me it didn't have a good flow...it had one that's smooth and easy to get into so in other words a great flow. This piece is actually cool in its own way. Despite how you claim this isn't your specialty you deliver a cool write. Forget flow and it's the content that stands out. First stanza was gripping and my favorite part.
~Faith-less

I kno exactly how u feel. wow. i couldnt of said it better myself. 5/5. =]

I think it says a lot about how you perceive things as a person. You're obviously quite a pessmist which isn't necessarily a bad thing because then you don't expect too much but life as an optimist (I am starting to find) is a hell of a lot better. I suffer from manic depression so i know what depression does to you but believe me, you can get out of it.. you just have to try.. it's only when you stop trying that you start dying! keep your head up and you'll find a better day.. :) x

I relly liked that poem it was good i only that one poem gone so soon cuz my boyfriend died and i cant get him out of my head

Ur style is different i kinda like it im new to this site n thanx for the comment on mine

Good poem.
It flowed well and the emotion was shown.
5/5

I love it. thanks for commenting on one of mine. your poems are great :) WOW* Keep writting

I love it. thanks for commenting on one of mine. your poems are great :) WOW* Keep writting

This is a beautiful work. I can feel the same pain, even through we do have different problems. Yeah, anywayz, keep it up 5/5!
-K

Great poem...i really liked and hey thanx for the comment/vote on mine..keep it up
5/5

XoXsweetkissesXoX

Good poem.
It flowed well and the meaning was shown well.
5/5

~Love Always Jess~

I want to hug you! Your words are so filled with emotion. Great poem

Good poem, i liked the way you set your stanzas out, it was very original. i particularly liked the first stanza, very good indeed!

thanks for my comment, much appreciated :D

Amy x