When you, Cause you, How you,,,

by leinhart   Jun 12, 2007


You took away my smile,

You took away my laughter,

You took my "what i look forward to every morning when i awale,"

When you leave,,,

Days are dull, no matter how bright it may be,

The warmth of the sun felt as cold as the coldest winter,

Food has lost it taste,

Cause you were not there,,,

I look you in the eye,

You look away just like that,

As if i was not even there,

How you did that?

Miss you lots,,,

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  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    What a sad poem.
    That feeling sucks.
    It's full of emotions and has a good imagery.
    Sorry, you had that feeling.
    Anyway, a beautiful poem.
    You take care

  • 16 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    :( Ohh this is so sad... I can definitely relate to feeling like this. And although that feeling may suck horribly, you portrayed it beautifully. Keep up the great writing, bud.