It was really good! good job

Aww really good. Poem had lots of emotion in it and flow was great. It was very sad write but like as it is under Life it shows life can be rough. Amazing poem.
Keep writing!
5/5

Idk what else to say, but wow. u really know how to express ur words. this was a really great poem, and i liked it. there are bumps in the road, but sometimes u have to take life as it is. u can change it by opening ur eyes and make good dicisions, or u can take the easy way out and jus let life beat down on u. great poem. if u ever neeed to talk to someone, let me know. i have been through alot since i was in 6th grade. its a long time, cuz now im going to b a junior in high school. well gotta go peace.

Great. great. poem. lol..its really good though I like how it has the "wandering" parts...keep itup:)
-Elizabeth

I can relate so much 2 all ov ur poems
ur quite good
goin in mi favourite authors
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This was a touching and emotional poem, I enjoyed this one a lot 5/5

That was really good, I liked it a lot. Made me think a little bit : ) Good job though!!

Lov this poem.. matter of fact i lov all ur poems!!

This one was brilliant u have a wonderful and amazing way with words:D
keep upt he gr8 writes
take care
bree

Well, clearly you were just getting some feelings out in this poem, and it shows. The world is a hard place, I don't think anything will ever change that.

Alesia <3