I hate everything...But you.

by Karissa   Jun 12, 2007


I hate life
I even hate strife
I hate the way I can't hold you anymore
I hate that it has to be you I adore
I hate how you think everything's your fault
I hate how you don't mind taking the blame
I hate how you don't get to share the shame
I hate the way we talk now
And I hate every question that begins with "How..."
I hate that us talking always ends in an arguement
I hate how I can't see your precious smile anymore
I hate these visions of you
I hate these visions of me too
I hate when you cry
I hate where things are going
And I hate not knowing
I hate crying
And I hate the feeling of dying
I hate smiling without you here
And I hate fighting back every tear.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Hatori

    Karissa,
    I felt that this poem had a lot of meaning in it, and you showed a lot of feeling as well, but I would change a couple things. Something that would help this poem is if you put it into stanzas. I think that if you did that, there would be more of a structure. Also, some lines seemed awkward. When I say that, I mean that if you made the lines the same length, then there would be more flow.
    There was a particular line that really caught my attention. This one:

    And I hate fighting back every tear.

    There was so much emotion that it really brought this poem together. Other than that, I wouldn't change anything.
    Keep it up, and thanks for the RRC's :D

    With all due respect,
    Hatori

  • 16 years ago

    by Lover Boii

    Hate is a strong word and you use it well. Maybe too well.

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