Crazy Dreams

by Beautiful Chaos   Jun 13, 2007


The wicked world of fantasy,
That's trapped within your mind,
Causes such great yearning,
It cannot be confined.

Seeping through your pores,
Slumbering in sweat,
Passion rages in your dreams,
Here heaven can be met.

Crazy dreams so full of lust,
But not just for the skin,
For all in life you have not touched,
Since it did begin.

Shining stars within your palm,
For here they may be held,
You never worry they may fade,
Here doubt is expelled.

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  • 16 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    I loved this. It made me smile. I can't believe more people haven't read and commented on this, I found it very good. I always like to find one specific stanza in a poem that I like, and with this one I kept highlighting each that I read, lol.

    "Seeping through your pores,
    Slumbering in sweat,
    Passion rages in your dreams,
    Here heaven can be met."

    ^^ That one is the one that stuck out to me the most, though. It has strong imagery and your word choice is impeccable. Great job.

    5.5
    :]

  • 16 years ago

    by adelinaxx

    I love your use of words. really captures it

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