When It Comes

by claire   Jun 13, 2007


Will we all work together
When it comes?
When it comes?
Will we all come together when it leaves?
If we all don't work together
If we all don't come together
We could be a mighty tree
But itstead we'll just be leaves.

**I leave this open to interpretation, so tell me what you take it to mean! (I only put it under Faith&Religion because I had to choose something, and many people would interpret this religiously! )

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  • 16 years ago

    by HiddenPoet

    Hmmm, this poem definitely is open to a lot of interpretation. "When it comes?" is the underlining question that you present.
    But what is "it"?
    Maybe the Second Coming is what "it" is?
    And the importance of all this coming together is becoming Christians, or at least following some kind of religion. Or just working together as a large, good community to make this world a better place.

    Whatever the interpretation, it was a interesting and good poem.

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