Nicely done. full of emotion.

Well you certainly don't deserve the ratings everyone has given you, but i guess i have a biased opinion now dont i lol. i thought it was beautiful, so heartfelt, just like all of yours are, that's why i love your poems so much, they come straight from the heart. beautiful goran, once again!

I liked this - short and sweet and still so full of hurt and feelings in there...

I think I might just go and read some of your other stuff now!! :) I love discovering new poets that I like their work... its so exciting!

5/5 - I also liked it cause it wasn't the usual structure that 99.9% people always use - I like the unique style. :)

Wow, goran.
this was so heartfelt. I agree with you it is hard, at leastyou admit the attitude of her toward you. but me,
i cannot even do that much

I liked this, it was portrayed in a very interesting style. However, I don't think this is your best bit. I felt that it was somewhat lacking in emotion. I felt you could have given more.

It was an enjoyable read, nonetheless. :]

Simple yet effective, But it seems to be lacking something, I too think the end came to abruptly, hmmm the flow was great, and the emtion was a little dry, but I have no clue how to make it better, overall i still thought it was a good write, and a good read 4/5

I really loved the title and when i read the poem, i thought of all the poems u had written before and if u made a graph out of it, then u will see alot of upside and downs and thats how the road of life is made and in ur case its not as smooth as it is for many of us, so this poem is one of those of that makes u really think and wants u to get involved
short but meaningful....
great job
all the best

Goran, Your word choice throughout this poem was so simple yet so effective. The emotion portrayed in this was yet again strong powerful deep and sweet. The flow amazingly written and the structure interesting as always. The meaning you wrote was capturing and heartfelt. I know all your poems come straight from the heart in pure beauty. Well done on this. loved it alot~mel

I really like the rhythm of this poem. It's progression to the last stanza is nice, the flow is defintely there. I love some of the expressions you used. Kudos! 5/5.

As always, Goran, I adore the simplicity and sincerity of the composition. It was arguably gorgeous, even though I thirst for more revelation of its message... It was written in such a beautiful, classy manner along with a fluid-like flow. Well done!

"But
What can I do?
If seeing your eyes
In my heart
Hundreds of poems I create. "

Knowing how eyes could induce such a sense of earnest sentiments and sensations within us thrills me exceedingly. How I adore this little piece! Keep on writing what you feel and like. I hope you all the best and take care. ~Debbie

Well i liked this poem just like ur others! dast xosh!

I like this one. That sounds stupid lol but really good:)
-Elizabeth

I know what it's like to feel this way trust me I do 100%
I think you showed us all how much pain and process love can take
This poem had a very good perpus(sp?)
I loved the emotion you gave out
and your figurative language
Nice work
5/5
love always
kaila

Very good. I really like this one...

Really liked it i can relate alot to this one the flow was different but it still worked great 5/5

Lovely write. well penned. good imagery. 5/5

Aww. this was a nice poem goran. the flow was great until the last stanza. then ou sorta lost me.

"if seeing your eyes in my heart, hundreds of poems i create" just reading it didn't make sense. hopefully you can clear me up on that one.

=] your fan.