Wow i can tottaly relate!!! you are an amazing writer!! keep up the good work!

Wow i can tottaly relate!!! you are an amazing writer!! keep up the good work!

Wow i can tottaly relate!!! you are an amazing writer!! keep up the good work!

AMAZING! seriousllyy! i can really relate.. cause i do the exact same thing.. waiting by the phone praying that it will ring.. and even though the day before i didnt.. i just think, this is a new day i dont have to dwell on yesterday. =)

Awwww thats really cute......
^_^ nice work I loved it!! had really nice flow to it

I think everyone can relate to this in one way or another! I know I definately can, lol. It reallly does suck. And you've done a great job expressing your feelings here. Loved it! 5/5

` Liz =]

I lovee the last stanza in this poem.. especially these 2 lines..

I know that you're not going to call
But it feels good to THINK you are.

very powerful... excellent job.. thanks for the comments =)

So just waiting huh...if it's about waiting i know how it feels...
i enjoyed reading the poem

"I know that you're not going to call
But it feels good to THINK you are.
All I can do is just wait and
Wish upon a shooting star. "
i liked the last part the most

Aww, saaad.
cuuute though!
great poem(: