This poem is really good!!

WHATS THIS???!!!!!??? IT IS SO PUZZLING AND DARK !!! AWESOME !! 5/5

Are u a child molester? or were u molsted aas a child?

Marty's friend Ray wants to know

Very dark.
Nice rhyming and very clear.
Great piece of writing.

Holy shit Solus... that hit me in the gut like a ton of bricks. Scary stuff. *breathe* Ok... the poem was good, very forceful words which just showed the dad's power over the child. *shudder* - portrayed VERY well.

I think I need to go read a happy poem now... :) Thanks for the read tho.

Mo

Reading this made my stomach cringe. Was that your aim. I loved it, real deep.

Oh my, this is so intense. So dark from the beginning to the end, you passed all emotions, fear especially, to the readers excellently.
Admirable piece of dark poetry.

WOW OF WOW!!!! I hope that this didn't happen to you, if it did try to forgive and move on.

You've done it again. You had me from start to finish. Please keep writing! Also, message me sometime! I'd love to converse with someone alike in mind. 5/5

I know Solus personally and most of his poems are based on his life. I personally find it amazing that he can share these things with me and others. but yea Amazing poem as usual Solus. oh how it wish it weren't true

Your poem was excellent. Definetly 5/5. The flow and rhyming was great!

Mm quite a poem there. very scary yet in the mask of a lullaby. you're a very talented writer.

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Horribly creepy, and very dark. I really hate how I know that some people truly think this way. I think you captured the evil in this story perfectly. From a writing perspective, I really enjoyed it. Good flow, rhyming...and ideas. From a more realistic stand point...I almost hated it. I don't know how to explain this any further...but just know it was a good write. 5/5.

-Rolo