I really did like this peom, I felt your emotions portrayed in this were strong and powerful I also gathered this came straight from the heart that is why it felt so hearfelt to me. You have written a great peom here it was a wonderful read I feel you put alot of effort into this piece of poetry so well done a good effort you should keep writing. ~mel

There is so much emotion in this poem, you defintely let it shine through. I find that when I'm depressed, my best poetry works come out. You did a great job, I really liked it. Kudos.

Very poignant it is, indeed, I dare say. One of the major highlights of this composition is the emotions. It was portrayed quite well on the whole and never failed to induce a sense of bleak weariness within me. A lovely work, nonetheless. Keep on writing what you feel and like. I hope you all the best and take care. ~Marian

The emotions were there, but not as pure and deep as i expected. But the poem itself was good, it flowed well, and i hope you feel better soon.
love Tara-Kay
xxxxx

The emotion in this peice is strong, and heartfelt, the word choice was simple yet powerful, and the message is clear. the flow was good, and the deepnes of the poem really kept my attention. I hope you get to feeling better soon, depression really sucks. 5/5

The poems that are based on a person's emotions always come out the best, as this one had. I loved it. Well done!

This poem is very good and deep...i can feel ur emotions pouring over tht poem i lik this line the best

"Looking and waiting for the time to be right.
Waiting for eternity for him to come and find me."

This poem is good. and dfeeling depressed ltes me write even better. sound kind of strange but it does. youll find the person you have been waiting for. im waiting for mine too, but it might take a while.

Depression is a great time to write it helps get things out that you would never think very strong feeling throughout the whole poem good job 5/5

laura

Your depresion is depicted in this piece well. The flow of emotions is very nice and I liked your wordings. Just be brave and be hopeful, things will be ok :) 5/5 all the way

This is indeed a sad poem and yeah i can somehow feel the emotions but doesn't completely strike my heart.. the simplicty were okay it made the poem more easy to figure out for the readers like me...