It was a good poem, but the concept of a flat line wasnt carried out except in the first and last stanzas.

and these:

"If youre socially retarded,
I must be socially dead.
You have half the world behind you,
But I am left alone in dread."

that seems a bit like a break in the poem, like u only placed some words in there to rhyme.

ANd...

"I wonder if you ever thought to take the time to,
Introduce me to your other friends.
Or maybe you thought I wouldnt fit in too well,
Or maybe theyd think Im a blend."

"blend" doesnt seem like a good word to put there. its forced, and doesnt put thepoint across i think u intend.

well, it was all around a decent poem, but i can see ur potential to do better.

love ya lots,
~sore

Gooooooog poem i enjoy reading it:):):)

soooooooooo nice :):):)

keep it up:):):)

khuloodan:)
smile all the time:)

I LOVE IT<3

Hiii.
*Waves*.
Look, it's Jayne =].
I like it.
I like it lots.
Very good poem.
=S Why am I talking like Borat?
Yeah, I gave it a 5 (Y).
<3.

Ye i read this one first

and like it alot
its a great poem
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Great poem. It sucks in more than one way to have friends like this. 5/5
-vino

Hey! gd poem i think everyone can relate to it at one point in their lives but for some people it hurts more rite? ....newaiz bck to the poem....propa deep and you brort the hurt and pain across really well to the reader. i agree wiv the first Sorefromreality that the word "blend" does seem a bit forced but overall 5/5 =]

Aisha
xxx

Aww I like this one! Its very expressive and it seems like its packed with emotion. I love it